377 days, Blog #154 A Scene
So I am little bit distracted this evening. I decided to read some of my manuscript and divert my agitation. I thought in lieu of original material, I would post a scene.
A couple weeks ago, the local Habitat for Humanity Re-store was auctioning off an antique stove. Turns out it went for a price I could have afforded. But all I would have been able to do was look at it and imagine this scene.
A couple weeks ago, the local Habitat for Humanity Re-store was auctioning off an antique stove. Turns out it went for a price I could have afforded. But all I would have been able to do was look at it and imagine this scene.
February 1924
Aggie stirred the eggs into the batter. She liked how they disappeared with the wooden
spoon into the yellow blend of flower and butter. She glanced at Mavis, but she turned back to
the sink and stood with her hands in the water as she glanced through the
window. She started washing the dish
again as the door from the dining room swung open.
“Now this,” Helen
looked at George and the two men who followed him into the room, “will be one
of the bigger projects this summer. I
don’t think the kitchen has been updated in at least twenty years. Not since Pauline set up residence here. And probably a while before that.”
Helen was wearing trousers.
Not like George’s, but flowing and shiny. Aggie liked how they moved as she walked with
a purpose from one side of the room to the other. She stopped at the door that opened out to
the back of the house. “It needs more
light. It’s such a dark room and you
appreciate so little of the view from here.”
“New windows then?” one of the strange men asked and
scribbled on his pad of paper.
“Yes. New
everything. A new stove. Mavis, did you have a chance to look at the catalog? What’s the one we have in
Boston, George? It’s much bigger than
this old thing. And, of course, we have
to get a refrigerator.”
“A refrigerator?” Aggie widened her eyes.
“The new models let you make trays of ice cubes,” Helen
winked.
George raised an eyebrow and leaned over the table to dip
his finger in the batter. “What are we
making?”
“Pound cake.” Aggie giggled as he wiped some on her nose and
licked the rest off his finger.
Mavis darted her eyes in disapproval. Aggie wiped off her nose and picked up the
spoon to stir again.
“Can we make it bigger?” Helen let out an exasperated
breath. “I always felt like this room
was too…oppressive. There’s the old
housekeeper quarters over here. But
Mavis sleeps upstairs with everyone else.
I thought we could make it more of a comfortable sitting room.”
“We could make it smaller and add some room to the kitchen
if you like,” the man with the paper smiled.
He liked looking at Helen.
“And add a bathroom,” Helen nodded. “But I leave all the color and appliance
decisions to Mavis. The only thing left
is some exterior work I think needs done.
Shall we go outside to look?”
George opened the kitchen door to let everyone outside. He turned around and winked at Aggie again
before shutting the door. Mavis looked
out the window of the door and watched them walk around the house. She wiped her hands on her apron and picked
up the well read catalogue she kept atop the bread box. “What do you think of this one, Aggie?”
Aggie liked the picture of the white appliance with two
ovens and four burners. She nodded at
Agnes and grinned at the sight of an elusive smile. “It’s a gas stove, but I think it will be
easier to teach you to cook on that.
It’s nicer than the one we had in the hotel kitchen.”
“Is it?”
“Your mama used to cook on that stove,” Mavis sighed.
“The one in the hotel?”
“Yes. And this old
thing, here. Before you were born.”
Mavis touched Aggie’s shoulder. “Finish
stirring that batter and I’ll make some cocoa.
I imagine they will all be cold from looking outside.”
Aggie picked up the spoon and smiled to herself. A new kitchen. A new stove, on which Mavis would teach her
to cook. Helen made everything
better. She even made Mavis smile.

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